08-21-2009, 04:28 AM
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مشرف بلغة أخرى
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الدولة : الربـــاط - المغرب
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كاتب الموضوع :
ايمان محضار
المنتدى :
إبداعات بلغات أخرى
Hi Imane ,
Welcome here among people you'll get to know with time.. and time is just what you have plenty of before you. You know that of course. Being different is good, but it is better to further better your difference and just go along with it to be just the best...
Nevertheless, as you know while you are a student by the way, you need to make efforts to progress. You know all that stuff which concerns learning and practicing, well, you will have to go through the same stuff in real life. Confronting the others, like in a mock exam, needs to gather some abilities, some of which you already have acquired.
The abilities and references you already have lead you to write what I may qualify as a song lyric. It is excellent as a start, and just the decision you made to try to 'defy' your friends, while you should convince them of your abilities which make your difference, is already a good sign of the singularity of your character.
What you wrote is good, you just need to focus on your goal and concentrate on your ideas and the style you write them in.. the mistakes just follow, they will remain, but with time they will leave your future productions. Some mistakes will always follow your pen. It's through mistakes we learn, and the main conviction of a balanced man is that he will never know everything, and that is just why he will always make mistakes. Mistakes are a sign of good health, and your mistakes just tell me that you are nervous and that you care, you focus more on ideas, the abilities will follow.
It's not a question of mistakes Imane, it's a question of philosophy, a question ideas gathered according to a certain (plan) an defended with knowledge and determinism.
If you want to enter a new world, you just need the maps (or your plans) and most of all, just as you do with a text.. you need to learn gradually so as you can answer comprehension questions and write your future projects with regard to the language skills and the writing rules.
At last, may I give you a precious key : it is just simplicity !
Write more simple sentences than compound and complex ones. Punctuation is like breathing.. it also ties words together so as that ideas wouldn't slip through them.
Also, grab your ideas one by one, and just set your words free, the proper ones of course, and, they will just obey you !
Good Luck Imane
and don't forget, you have plenty of time ahead !
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