The little piece of paper

سعاد بني أخي · 05-28-2009, 08:25 PM

Just like a small folded piece of paper
I found myself somewhere
Don’ know even where
Nor who the users were
So many they were
I unfolded my wrinkles
Endeavoured to read what was there:
Some complained
Some ordered and some scolded
Some just wanted to know how much they were dear
As to me, the least dear of all,
I wasn’t there
I don’t know where I was
Actually, a little with those who complained
A little with those who ordered
A little with those who scolded
And most of time with those who just wanted to know if they were there!
Those who just wanted to know if they were
I’m so disappointed I was not there
Too wrinkled was the paper
Too full of all but me
Too late it is for me to find a place where to be...
The too little piece of paper left there was me!

عبد اللطيف غسري · 06-19-2009, 10:31 PM

I have read your gorgeous little piece of poetry and got astonished at this subtle way of expression you managed to pass your message through
It's an exquisite piece of art.
take care
Abdellatif Rhesri

علال فري · 07-12-2009, 09:00 PM

A beautiful analogy between the paper and yourself (or anyone else the protagonist represents)
The image is so smartly and aristically built
and most of all, the simplicity of it all
may I call it natural beauty !

سعاد بني أخي · 07-14-2009, 10:01 PM

اقتباس : المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبد اللطيف غسري [ مشاهدة المشاركة ]

I have read your gorgeous little piece of poetry and got astonished at this subtle way of expression you managed to pass your message through
It's an exquisite piece of art.
take care
Abdellatif Rhesri

Do you know dear Abdellatif, the comparison isn't that of a single lived time. It is a feeling that never leaves me
It was a pleasure to meet you here

شيماء الشامي · 07-14-2009, 11:12 PM

Dear Souad,

Is a beautiful poetry.I find the
comparison between yourself and the
little piece of paper very interesting and original
It was a great pleasure to reed your poetry

congratulations
chaymae

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